Comments on Season 1
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Post by Lexi on Feb 5, 2008 18:55:27 GMT
After being told that it was difficult to find where to post reviews and what not, I decided to move the comments board from the general area to here. I actually in the end thought it made a little more sense too, since some people may only read one series and not both and want to comment on just that one series. Anyway, if you have anything to say about the scripts, or even the prose versions (which will eventually get updated; work is a pain at the moment though) then you can say it here. Good or bad, I take both forms of reviews; although I will say I prefer constructive critism so I can work on things rather than just "that's crap" or something. So, what are you waiting for....get typing  Oh and this is even open for the guests who don't have a profile to review in, maybe you can review and then get to know people on here before officially joining? Lexi x |
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Post by likestories on Feb 5, 2008 19:45:15 GMT
Oh, I know who told you  Let's see, I have read so much and it will be too much to review now on every episode, even more so as I don't even remember everything. But I can't accept that Ebony is good. I can't and I won't. Kill Damien and make her the new Source like it's supposed to. ;D |
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Post by Lexi on Feb 5, 2008 23:28:58 GMT
Yup, you definitely know who told me Thanks and I know, there are a lot of episodes to review on, so don't worry, I understand. And you can't accept that Ebony is good? I guess you'll have to wait to find out if she really is good or not. |
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Post by likestories on Feb 12, 2008 12:44:31 GMT
I'm really glad Ebony is still evil. Of course I don't like her to turn Wyatt but it's good for the story. If he turns, that's it. I have a feeling like Ebony will be vanquished in the end, anyway ;D That'd be good because there could be a new character in season 2. But I guess, it'll take some time until the new season starts. So, is Charlene going to be Chris' girlfriend? Yeah, I know, you won't tell. She could of course die soon as she'll be a whitelighter. But they still could become a couple, right? I'm a bit sceptical about this Josh guy for Prue (see, I got the right name this time.) I only hope, it won't turn out to be too much alike the time when Phoebe was evil when Cole was the Source. You can watch those episodes here in TV and that would be boring for me. But I guess that won't happen. You have too many great ideas. Is there a reason why Chris moved back in so soon? I mean I would have thought that he never ever moves back in the apartement as long as Ebony is there. I thought he is more stubborn, or rather consequent. It was a good episode and I can't wait to see how Ebony will manipulate Wyatt. |
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Post by Lexi on Feb 12, 2008 23:35:35 GMT
Thanks for the review, and the whole Ebony thing, you will have to wait to find out how it all works out Charlene as Chris' girlfriend? Hmm, I think I should keep you wondering. But don't worry, she's not just a one off character. I do intend to kep bring past characters in every now and again, it annoyed me how the writers of Charmed just seemed to forget about people. Like Aviva and Ava. Turning out like Phoebe and Cole, hmm, no I can tell you not, it will not be like when Phoebe turned evil. She wasn't evil long enough for me, I was starting to like that storyline and then they took it away. Oh and keep your mind open about Josh, I just haven't had the time in his brief appearance to get his character across. O and Chris moving in, I will let you in on a secret, I just wanted to get him back out of the Manor tbh. I figured if he had lived away from home for a while, he wouldn't hack bing back there for too long - I know how I feel when ever I'm back at home with my parents and I can't wait to get back out and have some of my own independance. Yes he's stubborn, but he's also independant, if that answers that question |
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Post by likestories on Feb 17, 2008 20:38:05 GMT
I'm a bit confused about who will be turned evil now. Damien wants who? Ebony wants Wyatt, that's for sure.
I was really sad when the episode was over. It all went too fast. I liked the idea a lot with switching bodies. It could have been more described. But it still was a good episode.
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Post by CrazyWesRamseyFan on Feb 18, 2008 0:42:06 GMT
LOVE IT!
My BFF, Eri (HalliwellWriter145) got me into Charmed about a year ago. Now she's got me reading and writing fan fiction. ARGH! I swear, she's evil!
Anyway, she recommended me to these two stories, and I read both series. LOVE THEM!
I can't wait to see Chris evil. LOL, Eri and I are planning on reading it together next week, we can't wait to see it the other way around - instead of Chris trying to save Wyatt, Wyatt's gonna try and save Chris!
For Progeny, both of us have started to like Damien (HELLO!? Chad Michael Murray, nuff said) and hate Ebony. OH MY GOD, I SO think she's still evil!
Anyway, love the series so much, it's just so amazing. It's clear you've put your blood, sweat, and tears into it, and it's amazing. It must have took a lot of commitment, and it shows you work really hard on it. AKA: I could never do something like this!
Anyway, props to you. *Claps*
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Post by Lexi on Feb 18, 2008 11:46:56 GMT
Thanks to both of you. Yes, the episode did go fast, but when I get around to writing the prose version, it will be explained at lot more in depth. The fun about writing scripts is I don't have to put as much detail into it - I can wait until I turn it into a story.
Yes, Ebony does want Wyatt, and Damien is just following what he's been told by the Seer at the moment and if he finds something that he can use to his advantage, he'll do it. Sorry if it's getting confusing. Basically, right now, Damien wants Wyatt dead. (what evil doesn't?)
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Post by likestories on Feb 18, 2008 20:46:36 GMT
Ebony would be a much better Source than Damien if he has no plan himself but needs the Seer or a Seer. She knows at least what she wants and has an idea to get there. Her brother is nothing like her. She is tricky and manipulating - a really great character. I don't like Lindsay Lohan, but who cares. She will be Ebony now in world forever. It really frustrates me that no one but Chris is still not mistrusting her. She is so obviously evil. I realy can't wait for the next update.
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Post by matthew on Feb 24, 2008 22:10:16 GMT
Hey, great episodes, I read the the phoenix epi and it was great, LOL and as for World Swap, I always love anything to do with Alternate univerese or Mirror universe. btw I e-mailed you check it out, and great episodess, nice one. |
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Post by Chloe C on Feb 29, 2008 14:55:21 GMT
Hey, ok so I'll tell you my thoughts here, usually I just tell you but since you've made a comments board......
Anyway, so three episodes to catch up on that I haven't told you about.
1. Power Trip - Damien really can't lead the underworld can he? It's almost as if there was a big reason for the prophecy of Damien and Ebony, like there is a reason behind why they have to lead together. Ebony's the one with the plans and Damien is the one with the firepower. Am I anywhere near your thoughts?
2. Prudence the Phoenix Slayer - loved the take with the title, stealing it from Buffy the Vampire Slayer. I spotted that one straight away, and using Michelle Tractenberg (or however her name is spelt) as the Phoenix was great! Did you do that on purpose? The episode was great, using an idea of Charmed but making your own twist. I did wonder how you'd put their souls back in their rightful place. And FINALLY Wyatt is a little suspicious of Ebony, it's about time missy.
3. World Swap - I loved loved LOVED this episode. Switching into the mirror world and seeing the evil sides of their characters, without them actually turning evil was great. I am still waiting to see if Ebony will betray Wyatt and the others, if she will join her brother. I'm in teh middle, I don't know whether I want that or not, if she does turn evil it means Wyatt will turn evil too - or will he? Anyway, it's definitely going to be another Pheobe/Cole thing that's already been done...unless like everything else you're going to twist something slightly. I don't know, I'm impatiently waiting to see how it will all turn out.
Anyway, that's all for now, I'm going to review Angels and Demons now, hopefully I won't have missed so much.
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Post by matthew on Mar 2, 2008 22:53:01 GMT
Hey I loved the last episode, It was sad that HArvey died, but yea, its good to know he is alright, and btw you made a little charmed mistake. as every one know that Whitelighters or Half whitelighters cant heal evil, but how can Wyatt heal Ebony.....  |
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Post by Lexi on Mar 3, 2008 14:42:14 GMT
I didn't make a Charmed mistake at all, that's Wyatt for you. It's his Twice Blessed status. He can evil demons AND can sense into the Underworld - since that was mentioned earlier on in the season too.
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Post by Chloe C on Mar 3, 2008 16:52:12 GMT
I did wonder the same thing as Matthew about how Wyatt healed Ebony, but then I do remember something being mentioned about him sensing into the Underworld.
I liked this episode, it was great that it wasn't a demon that turned Chris invisible, and that witches can do normal things like science experiments. That idea was amusing, although it is a shame Harvey had to die.
Can't wait for next week's episode now, what's interesting is that Matthew wrote next week's episode, so definitely can't wait.
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Post by matthew on Mar 3, 2008 20:13:27 GMT
Yeah, I guess he is strong enough to heal Ebony, but what happens, when Paige or others try to heal Ebony, would the truth be revealed........ LOL, The Seer KNowns it all, I just helped Lexi, pushed it a little bit forwards, I didnt write everything, LOL, but I cant believe we are halfway through the show, and it feels like its only just started....we just have to hope and see what the "Head" say about the second Season, would we have another season or would we finish with this season...I really hope there will be another season. but So far, the episode is great and love the way its going on. |
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